Write the first screen for someone who is reading badly because they are upset
People do not arrive at a divorce website calm, curious and well rested, and design that assumes otherwise loses them before the fold.
Attention here is short and shallow. Readers scan for confirmation that they are in the right place, and if the first screen offers a mission statement instead, they leave and open the next tab.
Three things belong above the fold: what kind of matters you handle, where you handle them, and what happens next. Where you handle them means naming the City of St. Louis, St. Louis County, St. Charles County and whether you act on the Illinois side, because a reader in the Metro East needs that answer immediately and a reader in Florissant needs it almost as fast.
Cut the Latin and the throat-clearing. Short lines, ordinary nouns, one idea per sentence. Bar advertising rules also limit what a site may claim about outcomes, so keep the language factual and run the final copy past your own counsel.
A decent test: read your homepage aloud. Anything you would not say to a person sitting across from you in that state of mind comes out.