The first screen belongs to site conditions, not to a sunset rendering
Before a buyer here cares about finishes, they want evidence you have dealt with the ground under their yard.
Renderings sell the finish, and the finish decision comes late. The first screen should carry three things instead: what you build, which counties and cities you build in, and one clear line acknowledging the site work that comes before any concrete goes in.
A photograph of an excavation with steel in it is more persuasive to a nervous Tampa buyer than any twilight render. It says you have been in this ground before, which is precisely the doubt they arrived with.
Keep the phone number and a booking link visible without scrolling and without a modal. A homeowner in a backyard is not going to hunt for a way to contact you when the next builder's number is one tab away.
Say who you are in a sentence a peer would use. Licensed builder, this many years, these counties, these kinds of jobs. Vague brand language costs you the reader who came to check whether you are real.