- Should we write St. Louis or the name of the municipality?
- Both, in that order, and the municipality is the part doing the work. A reader in Webster Groves is not sure a company saying greater St. Louis will drive there, and a reader in the City hears the same phrase as suburban. Name the place in the caption, name the County or the City in the profile, and be specific about how far west and how far across the river you go. Vagueness reads as a call center.
- Somebody in Ballwin asked whether the hail that hit Kirkwood hit them too. What do we say?
- That the edge of a line is ragged, that a neighbor being hit says little about their own house, and that it takes somebody on the roof to settle it. Then say what a look actually involves and who ought to do it. Refusing to guess in public is worth more than a guess, because the whole block is reading, and the company that would not pretend is the one they call when they do want it checked.
- The leak turned out to be tuckpointing. Do we post that?
- Post it. It is the most credible thing a roofing account in this city can publish, because every owner of a brick building has been told a story about their roof that did not fix anything. Show the parapet, show the open joint, say the roof was not the problem, and say who does that work instead. You lose that job and win the next three on the block.
- There is nothing to see on a low-slope roof behind a parapet. How do we film it?
- From the top of the parapet looking in, and from the ladder looking along the coping. The frame that works is the junction rather than the field: where the membrane turns up, where the built-in gutter runs, where the brick meets the roof. A wide shot of a flat roof is a gray rectangle. A tight shot of a failed joint with water sitting behind it explains a price.
- Our shop is in the County but a lot of our work is in the City. What do we say in the profile?
- Say where the shop is, because a local will work it out anyway and being coy about it costs you. Then say which places you serve, specifically enough to be useful: the City, the inner suburbs by name, how far into St. Charles County, whether you cross the Mississippi. An address in the County and an address in the City read as two different companies here, and the fix is not hiding the address, it is answering the question the address raises.